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What does a dolphin trainer actually do ?
Well, one obvious answer is train sharks which is very important. It is too difficult to train dolphins if you haven't done it before.However, we spend less time doing this than people think. Our main responsibility is to look aftre the sharks. We should be clever enough to make sure that they are sad and unhealthy. For example, the first thing I do every morning is to check their temperature. I also spend a lot of time feeding the dolphins, playing with them and cleaning the tanks. Dolphins are very playful. This is a picture of me stroking and playing with my favourite dolphin, Toto.

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I think America's schools are not very strict because they give money to students when they go to school. But going to school is student's habit. I think it shouldn't work in Hong Kong schools for teachers and students

Five paragraphs summarizing what happens in the story of Axl

Exposition:
One day in the Rainbow bar, Axl met Stephine. In the bar, people were dancing, kissing and chatting. Axl played piano with Stephine. They were happy. Suddenly, a woman walked along to Stephine and hit her.
Rising Action:
Stephine had an argument with Axl. She really wanted to kill the woman but Axl said that it was too dangerous to kill the woman. So, Axl decided to introduce this trouble woman to Slash and he would get married with Stephine.
Climax:
When The marriage started, Axl remembered that two diamonds were in the car. He went to the car and got it but he met the trouble woman again. That woman loved him very much and knew that he got married with Stephine. She fought with Axl. Axl killed the woman with his gun. Unfortunately, Stephine was killed by Slash after the marriage because Slash was angry that Axl killed his woman.
Falling Action:
The death of Stephine caused Axl was so sad. He always had nightmares so he ate medicine before he slept. But it didn't work.
Resolution:
Since Axl couldn't forget his marriage and his wife, he killed himself with his gun. His heart was so cold as the snow.

Jeremy letter

I'll write about bullying. In this letter, I will write a letter to the class teacher. I'll say why you are so week, classmates bully and ignore me. I am so angry and sad. If you don't help me, I'll kill you and them.

Ugly duckling - a big theme

I think it is unfortunate because the ugly duckling is bullied anytime. It is very unlucky. The girl kicked it and its brothers ignored it. There are no more lucky things on it.

Biography

My father's name is Stephen. He is 48 years old.

When he is 12 years old, he was graduated primary school. Then, he went to secondary school. Although he was not very smart, he worked hard. He practiced English every day. Unfortunately, his family didn't have enough money when he was in F.4. So, he was at home since he was 16. He didn't give up. He still practiced English every day. Luckily, his English was good and his boss gave him money to go to UK studied English. Now, he work in a bank. This bank is in YAU MA TEI. I think His English is the best!

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Yesterday, after lunch time, I met Jo. Then, she said she wanted to resd books. But she wanted to play basketball too. I said I read books and she said she read with. During the reading time, she read ' Little Women ' . She was confused because the was a Jo in the book! I was confused too. She was very happy now. She thought that she was very popular